Psychology

I've got my counselling essay back today,
here's the comment from the lecturer, Brian.

This was a good essay Chinn Yun. You have shown a clear understanding of many aspects of Beck's theory and shown how helpful his cognitive appraoch can be with a range of problem. You dealt with schemas which was very important in his approach. xxx I can't read the following sentence due to Brian's cursive writing xxx Overall, a good essay.
Mark: 70%

I then asked Brian to read me his comment because no one can really read it.
He read to me,
but now,
back at home,
I have totally no idea about what was he writing on my comment sheet!
And Brian,
I have a question,
since you gave me such a good comment,
why did I only get 70% for the essay?
Don't I deserve a higher mark for such a good essay?

After 2 years' study in psychology,
I found myself improved a lot.
Personality, interpersonal relationship, English, writing skills...etc,
I've got more than what I should learn from psychology!
I struggled very much initially,
I wanted to give up,
I thought I was wrong.
But friends' encouragments brought me to where I am now,
I have more confident,
I know what people want from a psychology graduate,
I am stronger!

I now can shout stentorianly,
I WON'T REGRET THAT I'VE CHOSEN PSYCHOLOGY!